Wednesday, November 16, 2011

fairy tale

In this the story Enchanted its so different from any of the real story's that invole the characters. The character that i chose to talk about is blog is Humpty-Dumpt the reason why is becuawse he was my favorite character in my child hood. Now seeing him in this story he looks so much different and acts more different then he does in this old storys. In the orgnail story Humpty-Dumpt was an egg he had everything of a chick but just was stuck in a egg form the father chicken and mother chicken tried to break the egg but it was to touge. Humpty-Dumpt got his name by him being clumsy. The character in Enchanted he looks much different he looks like a rocks more and he is fat and he weres jewerly

1 comment:

  1. Too many typos, too short, not enough detail, and you got the character's name wrong. You need to put some more effort into your work.

    6/10

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